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From: Mael <mael.thomas@data.gouv.fr>
Date: Mon, 10 Sep 2018 10:35:35 +0200
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 .../pages/Company/CreationChecklist.js        | 39 ++++++++++---------
 1 file changed, 21 insertions(+), 18 deletions(-)

diff --git a/source/sites/mycompanyinfrance.fr/pages/Company/CreationChecklist.js b/source/sites/mycompanyinfrance.fr/pages/Company/CreationChecklist.js
index 4fe37bf28..0f6b05fd3 100644
--- a/source/sites/mycompanyinfrance.fr/pages/Company/CreationChecklist.js
+++ b/source/sites/mycompanyinfrance.fr/pages/Company/CreationChecklist.js
@@ -59,8 +59,8 @@ const CreateCompany = ({
 						explanations={
 							<>
 								<p>
-									<strong>The corporate name</strong> (dénomination sociale) is
-									the legal name of your company, written on all of your
+									<strong>The corporate name</strong> ("dénomination sociale")
+									is the legal name of your company, written on all of your
 									administrative papers. It can be different from the trade name
 									(used for commercial purpose).
 								</p>
@@ -80,8 +80,8 @@ const CreateCompany = ({
 					title="Write the corporate purpose of the company"
 					explanations={
 						<p>
-							<strong>The corporate purpose of the company</strong> (object
-							social) is the main activity run. A secondary activity can be
+							<strong>The corporate purpose of the company</strong> ("objet
+							social") is the main activity run. A secondary activity can be
 							registered.
 						</p>
 					}
@@ -111,11 +111,11 @@ const CreateCompany = ({
 						title="Write the company's articles"
 						explanations={
 							<p>
-								<strong>The company's articles of association</strong> (
-								<em>les statuts</em> in French), is an official document written
-								in French, describing the status choice, naming the associate(s)
-								and the contributed capital. For more than one associates, it is
-								recommended to ask for the help of a lawyer to write them.{' '}
+								<strong>The company's articles of association</strong> ( "les
+								statuts"), is an official document written in French, describing
+								the status choice, naming the associate(s) and the contributed
+								capital. For more than one associate, it is recommended to ask
+								for the help of a lawyer to write them.{' '}
 								{status === 'SARL' && (
 									<a href="http://media.apce.com/file/72/3/statuts_sarl_(aout_2014).37032.72723.doc">
 										Example of articles for a SARL
@@ -167,9 +167,12 @@ const CreateCompany = ({
 								</p>
 								<p>
 									The deposit consists of a transfer of a sum of money to a
-									blocked account with a bank or the Caisse des dépôts et de
-									consignations or a notary, who must then provide a certificate
-									of deposit of capital.
+									blocked account with a bank or the public{' '}
+									<a href="https://consignations.caissedesdepots.fr/entreprise/creer-votre-entreprise/creation-dentreprise-deposez-votre-capital-social">
+										Caisse des dépôts et consignations
+									</a>{' '}
+									or a notary, who must then provide a certificate of deposit of
+									capital.
 								</p>
 							</>
 						}
@@ -183,18 +186,18 @@ const CreateCompany = ({
 							<>
 								<p>
 									A <strong>notice of incorporation of the company</strong> must
-									be published in a newspaper of legal announcements (JAL), for
-									a cost of publication that depends on the size of the
-									announcement and the rates charged by the JAL.
+									be published in a newspaper of legal announcements ("JAL"),
+									for a cost of publication that depends on the size of the
+									announcement and the rates charged by the chosen newspaper.
 								</p>
 								<p>
 									<a href="https://actulegales.fr/journaux-annonces-legales">
-										Find a newspaper of legal announcements (JAL)
+										Find a newspaper of legal announcements ("JAL")
 									</a>
 								</p>
 								<p>This notice must contain the following information:</p>
 								<ul>
-									<li>The company name and possibly its acronym</li>
+									<li>The company's name and possibly its acronym</li>
 									<li>The legal form</li>
 									<li>The amount of the company's capital</li>
 									<li>The address of the registered office</li>
@@ -272,7 +275,7 @@ const CreateCompany = ({
 								of operating loss.
 							</p>
 							<a href="https://www.economie.gouv.fr/entreprises/assurances-obligatoires">
-								More information
+								More information (Fr)
 							</a>
 						</>
 					}